From 2fe9e1dc044581a6f2a33b385a8ecc3a73aea70c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Evan Read <eread@gitlab.com> Date: Tue, 6 Nov 2018 10:41:30 +1000 Subject: [PATCH] Add refinements from product marketing feedback --- doc/README.md | 22 ++++++++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/README.md b/doc/README.md index 95fc077e57c..74747d53d48 100644 --- a/doc/README.md +++ b/doc/README.md @@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ Have a look at some of our most popular documentation resources: | [SSH authentication](ssh/README.md) | Secure your network communications. | | [Using Docker images](ci/docker/using_docker_images.md) | Build and test your applications with Docker. | -## Complete DevOps with GitLab +## The entire DevOps Lifecycle GitLab is the first single application for software development, security, and operations that enables [Concurrent DevOps](https://about.gitlab.com/concurrent-devops/), @@ -416,7 +416,7 @@ The following sections outline tiers and features within GitLab self-managed and ### GitLab self-managed -With GitLab self-managed, you deploy your own GitLab instance on-premises or on a private cloud of your choice. +With GitLab self-managed, you deploy your own GitLab instance on-premises or on a cloud of your choice. GitLab self-managed is available for [free and with paid subscriptions](https://about.gitlab.com/pricing/#self-managed) in the following tiers: | Tier | Includes | @@ -426,10 +426,13 @@ GitLab self-managed is available for [free and with paid subscriptions](https:// | Premium | Core, Starter, and Premium features. | | Ultimate | Core, Starter, Premium, and Ultimate features. | -To learn more about GitLab: +The following resources are available for more information on GitLab self-managed: -- Features at each tier, see our [Feature Comparison](https://about.gitlab.com/pricing/self-managed/feature-comparison/) for self-managed. -- Subscriptions and licensing, please refer to the [GitLab Product Marketing Handbook](https://about.gitlab.com/handbook/marketing/product-marketing/#tiers). +- [Feature comparison](https://about.gitlab.com/pricing/self-managed/feature-comparison/), for information on what features are available at each tier. +- [GitLab pricing page](https://about.gitlab.com/pricing/#self-managed), for subscription information and a free trial. +- Our [product marketing page](https://about.gitlab.com/handbook/marketing/product-marketing/), for additional information including: + - How [different tiers are licensed](https://about.gitlab.com/handbook/marketing/product-marketing/#tiers). + - The different [GitLab distributions](https://about.gitlab.com/handbook/marketing/product-marketing/#distributions). <div align="right"> <a type="button" class="btn btn-default" href="#overview"> @@ -457,10 +460,13 @@ to the same features available in GitLab self-managed, **except TIP: **Tip:** To support the open source community and encourage the development of open source projects, GitLab grants access to **Gold** features for all GitLab.com **public** projects, regardless of the subscription. -To learn more about GitLab: +The following resources are available for more information on GitLab.com: -- Features at each tier, see our [Feature Comparison](https://about.gitlab.com/pricing/gitlab-com/feature-comparison/) for GitLab.com. -- Subscriptions and licensing, please refer to the [GitLab Product Marketing Handbook](https://about.gitlab.com/handbook/marketing/product-marketing/#tiers). +- [Feature comparison](https://about.gitlab.com/pricing/gitlab-com/feature-comparison/), for information on what features are available at each tier. +- [GitLab pricing page](https://about.gitlab.com/pricing/), for subscription information and a free trial. +- Our [product marketing page](https://about.gitlab.com/handbook/marketing/product-marketing/), for additional information including: + - How [different tiers are licensed](https://about.gitlab.com/handbook/marketing/product-marketing/#tiers). + - The different [GitLab distributions](https://about.gitlab.com/handbook/marketing/product-marketing/#distributions). <div align="right"> <a type="button" class="btn btn-default" href="#overview"> -- 2.30.9