Geo: Minor improvements to Disaster Recovery and Planned Failover docs

doc/administration/geo/disaster_recovery/index.md

@@ -79,6 +79,10 @@ must disable the primary.
       - Revoke object storage permissions from the primary
       - Physically disconnect a machine
 
+1. If you plan to
+   [update the primary domain DNS record](#step-4-optional-updating-the-primary-domain-dns-record),
+   you may wish to lower the TTL now to speed up propagation.
+
 ### Step 3. Promoting a secondary Geo replica
 
 1. SSH in to your **secondary** and login as root:
@@ -146,6 +150,10 @@ secondary domain, like changing Git remotes and API URLs.
     external_url 'https://gitlab.example.com'
     ```
 
+    NOTE: **Note**
+    Changing `external_url` won't prevent access via the old secondary URL, as
+    long as the secondary DNS records are still intact.
+
 1. Reconfigure the secondary node for the change to take effect:
 
     ```bash

doc/administration/geo/disaster_recovery/planned_failover.md

@@ -187,38 +187,45 @@ Until a [read-only mode][ce-19739] is implemented, updates must be prevented
 from happening manually. Note that your **secondary** still needs read-only
 access to the primary for the duration of the maintenance window.
 
-At the scheduled time, using your cloud provider or your node's firewall, block
-all HTTP, HTTPS and SSH traffic to/from the primary, **except** for your IP and
-the secondary's IP.
-
-For instance, if your secondary originates all its traffic from `5.6.7.8` and
-your IP is `100.0.0.1`, you might run the following commands on the server(s)
-making up your primary node:
-
-```
-sudo iptables -A INPUT -p tcp -s 5.6.7.8 --destination-port 22 -j ACCEPT
-sudo iptables -A INPUT -p tcp -s 100.0.0.1 --destination-port 22 -j ACCEPT
-sudo iptables -A INPUT --destination-port 22 -j REJECT
-
-sudo iptables -A INPUT -p tcp -s 5.6.7.8 --destination-port 80 -j ACCEPT
-sudo iptables -A INPUT -p tcp -s 100.0.0.1 --destination-port 80 -j ACCEPT
-sudo iptables -A INPUT --tcp-dport 80 -j REJECT
-
-sudo iptables -A INPUT -p tcp -s 5.6.7.8 --destination-port 443 -j ACCEPT
-sudo iptables -A INPUT -p tcp -s 100.0.0.1 --destination-port 443 -j ACCEPT
-sudo iptables -A INPUT --tcp-dport 443 -j REJECT
-```
-
-From this point, users will be unable to view their data or make changes on the
-**primary** node. They will also be unable to log in to the **secondary** node,
-but existing sessions will work for the remainder of the maintenance period, and
-public data will be accessible throughout.
-
-Next, disable non-Geo periodic background jobs on the primary node by navigating
-to **Admin Area ➔ Monitoring ➔ Background Jobs ➔ Cron** , pressing `Disable All`,
-and then pressing `Enable` for the `geo_sidekiq_cron_config_worker` cron job.
-This job will re-enable several other cron jobs that are essential for planned
-failover to complete successfully.
+1. At the scheduled time, using your cloud provider or your node's firewall, block
+   all HTTP, HTTPS and SSH traffic to/from the primary, **except** for your IP and
+   the secondary's IP.
+        
+     For instance, if your secondary originates all its traffic from `5.6.7.8` and
+     your IP is `100.0.0.1`, you might run the following commands on the server(s)
+     making up your primary node:
+
+     ```
+     sudo iptables -A INPUT -p tcp -s 5.6.7.8 --destination-port 22 -j ACCEPT
+     sudo iptables -A INPUT -p tcp -s 100.0.0.1 --destination-port 22 -j ACCEPT
+     sudo iptables -A INPUT --destination-port 22 -j REJECT
+
+     sudo iptables -A INPUT -p tcp -s 5.6.7.8 --destination-port 80 -j ACCEPT
+     sudo iptables -A INPUT -p tcp -s 100.0.0.1 --destination-port 80 -j ACCEPT
+     sudo iptables -A INPUT --tcp-dport 80 -j REJECT
+
+     sudo iptables -A INPUT -p tcp -s 5.6.7.8 --destination-port 443 -j ACCEPT
+     sudo iptables -A INPUT -p tcp -s 100.0.0.1 --destination-port 443 -j ACCEPT
+     sudo iptables -A INPUT --tcp-dport 443 -j REJECT
+     ```
+
+     From this point, users will be unable to view their data or make changes on the
+     **primary** node. They will also be unable to log in to the **secondary** node,
+     but existing sessions will work for the remainder of the maintenance period, and
+     public data will be accessible throughout.
+
+1. Verify the primary is blocked to HTTP traffic by visiting it in browser via
+   another IP. The server should refuse connection.
+
+1. Verify the primary is blocked to Git over SSH traffic by attempting to pull an
+   existing Git repository with an SSH remote URL. The server should refuse
+   connection.
+
+1. Disable non-Geo periodic background jobs on the primary node by navigating
+   to **Admin Area ➔ Monitoring ➔ Background Jobs ➔ Cron** , pressing `Disable All`,
+   and then pressing `Enable` for the `geo_sidekiq_cron_config_worker` cron job.
+   This job will re-enable several other cron jobs that are essential for planned
+   failover to complete successfully.
 
 ## Finish replicating and verifying all data
 
@@ -230,7 +237,6 @@ failover to complete successfully.
    before it is completed will cause the work to be lost!
 1. On the **primary**, navigate to **Admin Area ➔ Geo Nodes** and wait for the
    following conditions to be true of the **secondary** you are failing over to:
-
     * All replication meters to each 100% replicated, 0% failures
     * All verification meters reach 100% verified, 0% failures
     * Database replication lag is 0ms
@@ -256,6 +262,8 @@ begin to diverge from the old one. If problems do arise at this point, failing
 back to the old primary [is possible][bring-primary-back], but likely to result
 in the loss of any data uploaded to the new primary in the meantime.
 
+Don't forget to remove the broadcast message after failover is complete.
+
 [bring-primary-back]: bring_primary_back.md
 [ce-19739]: https://gitlab.com/gitlab-org/gitlab-ce/issues/19739
 [container-registry]: ../replication/container_registry.md