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         <h1>Agenda</h1>
         <ul>
-          <li>What is a campaign</li>
+          <li>What is a campaign?</li>
           <li>How to create a campaign</li>
           <li>How to edit a campaign</li>
           <li>How to open a campaign</li>
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
         <img title="Campaign example: Beta Developer Program" alt="Campaign example: Beta Developer Program" type="image/svg+xml" src="http://img.erp5.cn/user-Tickets.Campaign.Example.Vifib.Beta.Developer.Program?format=png">
         <details open="open">
           <p>
-            VIFIB director Mr Smets plans to launch a marketing campaign aims to increasing the product awareness of SlapOS the new operation system of VIFIB, in the way of hiring software developers. The main interactions of this campaign is to send mail messages to contacts (customers) of VIFIB, and these emails would be the <strong>Related Events</strong>
+            VIFIB director Mr Smets plans to launch a marketing campaign aims to increase the product awareness of SlapOS (the new operation system of VIFIB), in the way of hiring software developers. The main interaction of this campaign is to send mail messages to contacts (customers) of VIFIB, and these emails would be the <strong>Related Events</strong>
             of this
             <strong>Campaign Ticket</strong>
             . So they would be listed in the detail page of this Ticket.
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         <details open="open">
           <p>From the previous introductories of Events and Tickets, we know that a campaign in ERP5 CRM is a Ticket. The principle of a ticket is to gather one or more events in the same place, offering a good follow up for them.</p><p>
             In our VIFIB example, the operations manager XU Jingjing created the <strong>Campaign Ticket</strong>
-            the "Beta Developer Program" (the right side screen shot) for the VIFIB marketing campaign. In the detail page of this ticket we can see it gathers all the
+            the "Beta Developer Program" (the right side screen shot) for the VIFIB marketing campaign. In the detail page of this ticket we can see that it gathers all the
             <strong>Events</strong>
             which "
             <strong>Follow Up"</strong>
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         <img src="http://img.erp5.cn/user-Howto.Create.A.Marketing.Campaign.Open.Campaign.Action.List?format=png" alt="Open a Campaign: Choose 'Open' in the Action List" type="image/svg+xml" title="Open a Campaign: Choose 'Open' in the Action List">
         <details open="open">
           <p>
-            In order to open a campaign, open first the “Action” Item List, and Choose “Open”. <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">Note that this action can only be done by the Campaign Manager, or the creator of the Campaign ticket.</span>
+            In order to open a campaign, first open the “Action” Item List, and Choose “Open”. <span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">Note that this action can only be done by the Campaign Manager, or the creator of the Campaign ticket.</span>
           </p>
         </details>
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